Wednesday, 30 September 2015

Writing - about a place

The crib
The crib was usual enough. It had food, blossoming trees, sparkly fish, a lake and long grass. It even had some rocks we could climb.
My cousins and I did what kids do - jumped off the sparkly glimmer rocks, swam in the lake, played Mums and Dads in the forest and did gymnastics in the grass.
Doing nothing important.
By Olivia

Kaka Point
The town was usual enough. It had: a big pub, two playgrounds, a beach and an old church. It even had a small fish and chip shop.
My sisters and I did what girls do, we went to the very small dairy, swam in the deep blue sea, went for very long bush walks, gathered shells and went to the pub to eat lunch.
Doing nothing important.
By Claudia

Albert Town
The town was usual enough. It had a playground, a beach, a fish and chip shop, a lake, shops and a restaurant. It even had a fancy lake bar.
My family, my cousins and I did what people/holiday makers do - went to the pool, had fish and chips, cooked food, played at the playground and went to restaurants for dinner.
Doing nothing really important.
By Georgia

1 comment:

  1. Wonderful writing! You made your place sound like a great place to go visit! Keep it up! Mrs McKenzie

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